(A poetry exercise taking the first line of a published poem and creating your own poem in 10 minutes, minimally revised)
Small
as a fly bump, the little voice
rose
up from the tiny bed where she lay,
a
night spent at grammy’s house
where
grampy lived, too, in his gruffness
and
scratchy face when he scooped her up
to
his shoulders and whisked her off to bed,
setting
her lightly down, like a bird settling
on
a limb. And the story was told in a voice
loud,
then soft and loud again, his voice
the
voice of the animals in her favorite book,
the
one she’d brought from home, an old friend.
And
her voice rose up where she lay,
a
little voice, small as a fly bump,
and
her arms encircled his neck as she pulled
him
close, gruff and scratchy, the smell
of
the forbidden chocolate they had shared between them;
“I
love you ... goodnight,” and she lay back down.
Turning
off the light and pulling the covers tight,
“I
love you, too,” he settled down next to her bed
till
the little voice, small as a fly bump,
turned
to the gentle snores of childhood.
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