Lake Hebron in Fall

Lake Hebron in Fall
Lake Hebron in Fall

September 7, 2019

Page 91

(A poetry exercise taking the first line of a published poem and creating your own poem in 10 minutes, minimally revised)


Small as a fly bump, the little voice
rose up from the tiny bed where she lay,
a night spent at grammy’s house
where grampy lived, too, in his gruffness
and scratchy face when he scooped her up
to his shoulders and whisked her off to bed,
setting her lightly down, like a bird settling
on a limb. And the story was told in a voice
loud, then soft and loud again, his voice
the voice of the animals in her favorite book,
the one she’d brought from home, an old friend.
And her voice rose up where she lay,
a little voice, small as a fly bump,
and her arms encircled his neck as she pulled
him close, gruff and scratchy, the smell
of the forbidden chocolate they had shared between them;
“I love you ... goodnight,” and she lay back down.
Turning off the light and pulling the covers tight,
“I love you, too,” he settled down next to her bed
till the little voice, small as a fly bump,
turned to the gentle snores of childhood.

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